Caroline ... I think a ghost has followed us home! [2 of 3]
Definitely go to be looking out for Part 3. As you know I'm fond of stories where the supernatural/dead feed on the living. I loved the voice in the ghost section and the change of POV as it moved to the girls gave it a really creepy feel.
Ahh thanks Simone - that feedback is really useful
For sure. 👌 sometimes I don’t realise how transgressive my stories are until I start to get feedback! I had a happy childhood, honest!!
Thanks
It’s funny you say that - I’ve done a DARK one inspired by Rear Window 🫣perhaps I’ll add that soon
Definitely go to be looking out for Part 3. As you know I'm fond of stories where the supernatural/dead feed on the living. I loved the voice in the ghost section and the change of POV as it moved to the girls gave it a really creepy feel.
Ahh thanks Simone - that feedback is really useful
For sure. 👌 sometimes I don’t realise how transgressive my stories are until I start to get feedback! I had a happy childhood, honest!!
Thanks
It’s funny you say that - I’ve done a DARK one inspired by Rear Window 🫣perhaps I’ll add that soon